I showed my teacher my first edit in order to collect feedback on how I could improve the short film and this is what she has advised me to do:
- Cut the end of the first clip as it moves
- Fade from black in the first clip
- Cut the two lipstick shots to put between as she’s putting lipstick away then switches
- Cut away wobbliness
- Add in shot of putting hand on shoulder
- Cut off audio of background noise, add in foley sound
- Add in zoom effect on still images (more controlled use of camera)
- Edit in youtube channel to show what they’re actually filming for
- Emphasise laughing with sound, more layers
- Duplicate laugh, make more chopped
- Blur knife scene to blend with laughing
- Fix the lighting in clips
- Add in voiceover
- Add in credits at the end or beginning
I will be taking in the feedback my teacher has provided for my short film, and improve it to be able to make the final edit.
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